martes, 17 de enero de 2012

The “Tynooza finite” (Chapter one)


The “Tynooza finite”
By: Carla Sierra Arzuffi

Chapter one: Don’t let yourself get killed

Tyler Nooza was a very peculiar person. Or at least he thought he was. He had black hair and big hazel eyes, he had a very long nose, and a small mouth, but still he didn’t think himself and ugly person. He was just a few inches taller than his sister, who was older and meaner than anyone you can ever know. 

When they were little, his sister use to hide his monster collection trucks in all the creepy places in the house Tyler was scared of. He then had to go on a very dangerous hunt to retrieve his treasures. Once, while he was on the attic searching for his favorite crimson and red truck, a huge bat tried to eat him. And all because of his sister. When he was little, he had the suspicion that Amanda, his sister, trained that awful black bloodsucking animal to try to kill him. And now, 12 years later, he was sure of that.

You see, Amanda was always jealous of Tyler. Tyler always got attention from the people Amanda wanted to get attention from. When they were mere toddlers, that meant  their parents gave too much of their precious attention to Tyler. But as they grew older the tradition continued, and every time Amanda liked someone, that person would immediately like her brother better when they knew him. 

You cant blame Tyler, he was always a peculiar person, and people where immediately drawn to him. It was not because of the things Tyler did, or the way he looked, it was something else. But Tyler Nooza wasn’t sure what it was.

Amanda grew bitter year after year. When she was 11, she started the secret mission she decided to call “Tynooza finite”, she meant to make Tyler suffer in every possible way. When he was 14 Tyler learned that the ultimate goal of the wicked Amanda’s “Tynooza finite” plan was to kill him.  So he formulated a plan of himself, and it was not ironically called “The anti-Tynooza finite”.

Here I enclose the very important rules of “The anti-Tynooza finite” (Page one):
1.     Stay alive.
2.     Stay away from Amanda.
3.     Think ahead.
4.     Don’t let yourself get killed.

You would think this was only a harmless game between brother and sister. But you are wrong. This was a very dangerous game to play. Tyler knew he couldn’t tell anyone, even though he was always favorite, he wasn’t truly heard. And who would believe him anyway; Amanda was very good at keeping appearances. With a simple “No, I didn’t” she could crush all of Tyler’s plans to get someone to notice the evil miscreant his sister was. 

At 15, on a creepy October night, Tyler got this close----------to dying. 

To be continued.......

Indeed, a very, very dangerous game to play. Stay tuned. 
C.L.S.A

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